we had to wright about what she looked like and what she was wearing
we had to include all of the little things that she had on
the hardest part of all of it was not making them into storeys
i enjoyed how we got to copy our other work that we did on paper
i would add a little bit more sentences into it and try not to make it into a story.
Hi Bailey
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I really enjoyed reading your writing that you have posted. Great work Bailey.
You have described Alma very well. This was a very unusual video to watch. It started out quite happy but I thought it had a really sad ending.
Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)